Full of grammar errors; I was sitting there going "OY" in almost every sentence! and he's supposted to be the older one.. the one who got better grades in English! :: shakes head ::
Half his sentences are run ons which last for about 7 lines each! Apparently he doesn't believe in punctuation, not a SINGLE comma or semicolon anywhere!! Thank God he had full stops! No difference between -s endings and singular words...same for a, an before words starting with consonants/vowels....I mean this is BASIC stuff here!
And they let these people PASS?!?!